Nile Empire Kickstarter stretch goal PDFs going out

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Nile Empire Kickstarter stretch goal PDFs going out

Postby TorgHacker » Fri May 24, 2019 12:28 pm

Hey everyone,

Emails are going out for the Secrets of the Nile Empire, Relics of Power Act 1 and 2, and Religions of Core Earth PDFs and the backer archetypes. Some of you may not get those emails though, so check out your DriveThruRPG account.
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Re: Nile Empire Kickstarter stretch goal PDFs going out

Postby Spatula » Fri May 24, 2019 12:36 pm

Woooooooo! I'm so excited to see these!

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Re: Nile Empire Kickstarter stretch goal PDFs going out

Postby TorgHacker » Fri May 24, 2019 12:55 pm

Hopefully I did good. :-)

Especially Relics. :-)

Well, and Religoins. That one means a lot to me.
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Re: Nile Empire Kickstarter stretch goal PDFs going out

Postby TorgHacker » Fri May 24, 2019 1:18 pm

Note, it'll be in your Nile Empire Kickstarter Bonus Content.
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Re: Nile Empire Kickstarter stretch goal PDFs going out

Postby TorgHacker » Fri May 24, 2019 2:47 pm

Also, if* there are any corrections, report them here.

*there are always corrections.
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Re: Nile Empire Kickstarter stretch goal PDFs going out

Postby Taliesin » Fri May 24, 2019 2:53 pm

Thank you! I was really looking forward to this.

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Re: Nile Empire Kickstarter stretch goal PDFs going out

Postby Padre » Fri May 24, 2019 2:59 pm

I'm loving what I see so far. I'll try not to get too technical, but I'll definitely give some suggestions on the Religions of Core Earth pdf.

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Re: Nile Empire Kickstarter stretch goal PDFs going out

Postby Spatula » Fri May 24, 2019 5:48 pm

Love the archetypes, particular The Midnight Avenger, The Masked Flyer, The Road Paladin, and The Robot Man!
TorgHacker wrote:Also, if* there are any corrections, report them here.

*there are always corrections.

The Tramp Freighter Captain - page 2
  • skill table, water vehicles, "Dext" instead of "Dex".
  • skill table, last few cells in last column don't have background color.
Reptile Ranger - page 4
  • race says human, should be edienos.
  • Shock limit is 7, should be 8.
  • axiom of Rocket Ranger armor is 12?
  • skill table, last few cells in last column don't have background color.
page 4-5
  • power bomb summary & text says "2bd" which in the past has been written in caps, i.e. "2BD".
page 5
  • illustration and description says character is wearing a flight jacket rather than bulky Rocket Ranger armor, maybe the character should have Flight power instead with a gear limitation? (that is to say, it's described more like a rocket pack)
The Rugged Actor - page 6
  • skill table, Beast Riding, "DEx" instead of "Dex".
  • Thunder Pellets - cost? cool item, would love to see them available to all!
  • Thunder Pellets says "x4" but Ammo column says "7".
  • Mask "armor" does not note "Full Body".
  • Axiom for mask "armor" is different on different archetypes - here it is 20.
  • skill table, last few cells in last column don't have background color.
The Wonder Dog - page 8
  • "Dogsbody" should be "Dog's Body"?
  • perks table, "Man(kind)s Best Friend" should be "Man(kind)'s Best Friend" (no apostrophe).
The Midnight Avenger - page 10
  • Toughness should be 9, armor 2, for mask "armor" as per other archetypes.
  • Axiom for mask "armor" is different on different archetypes - here it is "Nile".
  • What does Inflatable Decoy do?
  • Don't suppose we could get costs for the decoy and infra-red goggles. Any chance these new items (plus thunder pellets) could be added to the Secrets of the Nile Empire?
  • perk table, Fear, Effect text ends in a comma.
The Sword of Justice - page 12
  • Mask "armor" does not note "Full Body".
  • Axiom for mask "armor" is different on different archetypes - here it is "WS".
  • The character is missing 1 skill add.
  • skill table, last few cells in last column don't have background color.
page 13
  • Quote font is wrong.
  • Quote punctuation is wrong: "Justice!." (extra period)
  • Should Swashbuckler perk have a melee weapons prerequisite? as written it could be used with any weapon including firearms.
The Tanoura Dancer - page 14
  • should Shield Discs defense bonus be incorporated into defense numbers?
  • skill table, last few cells in last column don't have background color.
The Vengeful Doctor - page 16
  • Axiom for mask "armor" is different on different archetypes - here it is "*".
  • skill table, last few cells in last column don't have background color.
The Masked Detective - page 18
  • Axiom for mask "armor" is different on different archetypes - here it is "*".
The Chosen Warrior - page 22
  • skill table, Persuasion, value should be 11.
The Mysterious Lady - page 24
  • skill table, Taunt, value should be 11.
page 25
  • Advancement Track, Natural Leader cost should be 9 XP.
The Femme Fatale - page 26
  • skill table, Lockpicking, "Dext" instead of "Dex".
  • skill table, last few cells in last column don't have background color.
The Masked Flyer - page 28
  • Toughness should be 9, armor 2, for mask "armor" as per other archetypes.
  • Axiom for mask "armor" is different on different archetypes - here it is "*".
  • skill table, last few cells in last column don't have background color.
The Road Paladin - page 30
  • Toughness should be 11, armor 2, for mask "armor" as per other archetypes.
  • Axiom for mask "armor" is different on different archetypes - here it is "*".
  • skill table, last few cells in last column don't have background color.
  • Shouldn't the Stinger's ability to produce Gadgets be worth a perk?

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Re: Nile Empire Kickstarter stretch goal PDFs going out

Postby Spatula » Fri May 24, 2019 7:33 pm

Religions of Core Earth, the miracle lists on page 23. What is the "Other Core Earth Religion" list for at the bottom? The non-atheist religions on page 21?

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Re: Nile Empire Kickstarter stretch goal PDFs going out

Postby TorgHacker » Fri May 24, 2019 8:42 pm

Spatula wrote:Religions of Core Earth, the miracle lists on page 23. What is the "Other Core Earth Religion" list for at the bottom? The non-atheist religions on page 21?


Yes.
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